First song with Larrivee OM-1. opinions please!

[chrsz]

Hi everyone, just wanted to get some honest opinions on our first song. My girlfriend and I wrote it and I recorded it with my Larrivee OM-1. Thanks!!

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=808169&content=music

[TheJudge]

sounds pretty good. I kept wanting to hear a more commercial hook to the song. The build up was good, but I felt a little let down b/c it seemed like the song never climaxed, if you will.

I like the sounds of the acoustic...it is "organic".

Keep writing. Peace.

[gkoelling]

...works for me!

Is the OM a mahogany, or rosewood body?


Thanks for sharing.