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Ricman
12-04-2008, 05:40 PM
The Tone Seeking Boys – The First Steps of the Electric Purple Shoes

by Ricman W. Dixon


Chapter One



Introducing the Tone Seeking Boys



“Rock-it, Johnny! Yeah, right on! Go, go, go!” screamed Delvin Marcliff as he came out of a quick fill and caught a 7” splash cymbal with an upward stroke. The deft punctuation to the beat caused Jerry Blayley to jerk his head toward the drum kit with an approving grin. Eager to show his chops, Jerry jumped a full octave on the fretboard of his bass and pulled off a series of descending triplets that underscored the solid rhythm work Marty Sheridan was chugging away with. Kevin Daniels, with the ease of much practice, tapped a few buttons on his synth and took over the lead from Johnny Blayley, Jerry’s twin sibling, just as Johnny’s E string went limp.
“Ah, man!” hollered Johnny stopping and holding out the broken string. “Second one this week!” he moaned.

The band came to a halt, a member at a time, each with a knowing smile passing between one another. “Well, if you weren’t such a hot rocker, your strings would last longer!” laughed Marty. “You break almost as many as I do!” Johnny defended himself. “You’re the only guy I’ve ever seen break every single string at once with one power chord!”
Marty gave him a wry smile, remembering the episode well. It was the opening note to a show they had done, not over a month ago, and the whole band had to suffer the embarrassment of stopping four beats into the first song of the night and wait while Marty changed guitar strings and retuned. “Well, at least we are getting some paying gigs nowadays and can afford broken guitar strings!” Marty said. “It wasn’t that long ago a new set of strings put us back in a major way!”

What Marty said was true. The five chums, fast friends for as long as they could remember, had fulfilled a long-time dream they had shared together by starting a rock and roll band. None of the boys came from privileged backgrounds and the start-up cost of equipment seemed overwhelming to each of them. “Because, if we can’t do our music at least halfway right, it seems as if we aren’t doing our music full justice!” was what Johnny, the band’s unofficial leader, was fond of saying. So, when the idea was first discussed among them about starting up a rock and roll band, the boys knew an adequate PA system was going to be of primary importance.
To that end each of the chums pooled what resources they had and drummed up other work, and over the course of months had accumulated enough money to acquire a modest PA system consisting of a 16 channel board, a power amp, two speakers with stands, two monitors, and 4 microphones. It was used equipment that had come in on a trade at the local music store, The Friendly Musician, but to the boys it was a first-class affair. A homemade snake, courtesy of Delvin’s cousin, rounded out their system.

With the purchase of the system the 5 friends started up their band in earnest. Jerry and Johnny’s house became their regular rehearsal studio. The brothers lived just on the outskirts of town and their home had a large barn on the property that backed up to dense woods. Mr. Blayley gave his blessing to the boys’ band, remembering in his youth how he and 15 of his closest chums had put together a garage swing orchestra and the great fun they had derived from it playing school dances and church ice cream socials. Mrs. Blayley easily fell into the role of band Mother and kept the lads supplied in tuna fish sandwiches and pickles among other delectable treats from her inviting, efficient, kitchen.

From the very start the lads knew their music was going to be something special. Each boy, although still high school age, was a remarkably accomplished musician. And even though their equipment was modest the chums were able to get the most out of it so that the resulting music was indeed something to behold.

After a few months of practice and working up three solid sets of material the boys had started in earnest looking for “gigs” as Jerry slangily liked to call the jobs they found. Their first shows consisted of playing for friends and school mates. Mr. Blayley, who, as mentioned, watched the progress of the boys with keen appreciation, suggested they make use of the large barn they practiced in to put on Friday night dances. “For after all,” he would say, “this nation’s social milieu was built upon the barn dance as a way to bring neighbors and community together.”

The boys liked the idea and many afternoons were spent creating posters and flyers and decorating the barn for their first big show. Each of the chum’s mothers got together and made overflowing trays of finger sandwiches, bowls of snack chips, trays of vegetable sticks, potato salads, and Delvin’s father was thrilled to be able to supply a generous quantity of his particular hobby of homemade sarsaparilla. And the music, needless to say, was gone over and over in practice until each note sparkled and the band was tight and crisp.

“Say!” exclaimed Marty, from his perch atop a tall ladder as he was hanging crepe streamers across the barn, “this is going to be all up to the nines!”
“You said it!” agreed Delvin as he paused from gluing little squares of aluminum foil on a large beach ball that would serve as a mirror ball for the show, “I didn’t know being in a band would be so much fun!” Kevin didn’t have a comment to add as he was industriously sweeping out the main part of the barn floor, but the look on his face told all that he was as content as the rest over the progress they were making toward their big show.
Johnny and Jerry, for their part, had been working on building a stage for the band to perform upon with scrap lumber donated by Mr. Jenkins, the lumberyard owner who was a Moose lodge member with all the chum’s fathers. The boys were just finishing putting a final coat of bright purple paint on the stage “because bright colors capture the exuberance of rock and roll!” Jerry explained to his mom as he noticed her unsure look over their choice of wild colors.

At that moment Jerry and Johnny’s Aunt Millicent walked into the barn and stopped, arms akimbo, casting a disapproving look over the whole affair. “Nothing good will come of this nonsense, mark my words!” she spouted, to no one in particular. “This rock and roll thing, as you children call this disparage of noise you produce, will do nothing but land the whole lot of you in a federal penitentiary, you just see if it does not!” And the look she gave the boys defied them to say anything to the contrary.

Aunt Millicent was the twin’s father’s peppery, spinster sister, who had made her home with them ever since her husband had passed when the lobster boat he captained had been attacked by an entire school of great white sharks and one rogue dolphin. Convinced that the family needed her opinions, and the boys her watch care in particular, Aunt Millicent was never at a loss for words.

“I cannot imagine your parents approving of such an undertaking as this!” she exclaimed as she sniffed disdainfully at the purple stage, and rolled her eyes at the now finished mirror ball Marty and Delvin were hanging. “No respectable young lady will be found coming to this dance, as you call it, and therein lies the problem! The morals that will come through the door of this barn you will regret associating with; I have seen it happen before!” and Aunt Millicent wagged a stern finger in the air to emphasize her point.
“Such as when you used to go to Dad’s barn dances when he and his buddies had the swing orchestra?” slyly grinned Johnny. “What kind of morals did you bring to those affairs, aunty?” innocently asked Jerry, while the rest of his comrades stood by on the broad grin.
“Well, the idea!” roared Aunt Millicent as she turned various shades of red, well remembering that she had indeed allowed a young man to kiss her cheek on one of those nights long ago. And at that, she turned on her heel and stormed out of the barn without a backward look.

“Whew, she doesn’t like this rock and roll music!” observed Delvin, cleaning up his scissors and glue. “She doesn’t like any music that doesn’t feature a pump organ.” Jerry said. “Playing electric instruments to her is the same as becoming one of those juvenile delinquents you hear so much talk about.”
“Well, we’ll be delinquent come opening night around here if we don’t get busy!” said Johnny. “There’s a lot yet left to do!” And he and his band mates stood back and admired the progress they had made.

“Let’s get those lights mounted up in the rafters.” suggested Marty, squinting skyward. Kevin agreed. “It will look like a real rock and roll show when we get that stage all lit up!” And at that each lad set to carrying boxes of spot lights and rolls of wire Mr. Gaycliff, the town electrician who was a city councilman along with the boy’s fathers, had donated to the event. Marty shinnied out on the beams while Delvin and Kevin stood on ladders handing him up lights and tools to mount them with. Behind Marty, Jerry ran wire along the beams and back to the hayloft of the barn where the boys intended to put the control booth for the lighting. Johnny, with his aptitude for electricity, was sketching out on a paper a diagram for controlling the lighting. “It won’t be anything elaborate,” he observed, “for we don’t have much to work with. But it will be sufficient!”

Before long everything was in place and Johnny threw the switch to open the circuit he had designed. The stage area flooded in light! “Oh, that’s swell!” hollered Kevin as he walked up on the stage and spun in a full circle. “It’s also swell the number you did on your shoes!” laughed Jerry. “That paint wasn’t dry yet!” And the rest of the band joined in the laughter as Kevin ruefully looked down at his purple-smeared shoes and the mess he had made of the paint job on top of the stage.
“Guess who gets to re-paint that part!” smiled Johnny as Kevin jumped to the ground.
“Oh, I don’t mind doing that!” said Kevin. “But cleaning these shoes off will be the what-for!” and he grimaced as he took them off.

While Kevin was applying a rag soaked in turpentine to his shoes, the rest of the boys “took five” over by their equipment. “You know something?” said Marty, taking a bite out of one the sandwiches Mrs. Blayley had brought over. “We need a name for our band!” The rest of the boys looked dumbfounded. They had been so busy getting ready for their show they had totally forgotten about what they would be known as!
“That’s right!” said Johnny, a little miffed at himself for not thinking of the fact sooner. “In the eyes of the public, a name is second in importance only to the music itself!”

“Well, anybody have any suggestions?” ventured Jerry as the group sat in silence for awhile. “Nope!” said Marty, with a scowl upon his countenance. Delvin started to say something, and then sat back without a word. “Gee!” said Johnny. “Picking a name isn’t easy!”
About that moment Kevin walked up from cleaning his shoes. They still had a hint of purple on them in spite of his best efforts to get all the paint off.
Johnny suddenly had a look of inspiration come over his face. “We can call ourselves the Purple Shoes!” he exclaimed. “The ELECTRIC Purple Shoes!” chimed in Jerry. “JOHNNY’S Electric Purple Shoes!” hollered Delvin. “JEPS for short!” Marty said, a look of awe in his eyes. “I LIKE IT!” Kevin said looking down at his shoes. “Now I can wear these and it will look like it was on purpose!”
Johnny looked a little embarrassed. “Are you sure that name is OK? I mean, we all are equal in this you know! Calling it Johnny’s…” “Hey!” came from Marty, cutting Johnny off mid-sentence. “It has a nice ring to it. And besides, you – being the lead guitarist and lead vocalist – it gives kind of a personality to the group. We’re all OK with it!” and the rest of the chums nodded their agreement. “Well, OK.” said Johnny. “But that doesn’t mean I make all the decisions! It’s one for all around here!”

Ricman
12-04-2008, 05:41 PM
The Tone Seeking Boys – The First Steps of the Electric Purple Shoes

Chapter One, continued


“I think that is a fine attitude to have, young men!” suddenly exclaimed a loud, gruff voice. Looking up, each boy saw a portly gentleman enter the barn, and stand, hooking his thumbs through the suspenders under his suit jacket.
“Uncle Hobart!” hollered Jerry and Johnny together, jumping to their feet, as the rest of the “gang” arose as well.
Uncle Gerald J. Hobart, for whom the twins were named after, was their mother’s brother. Uncle Hobart was a favorite of the lads and they, of him. He had always spoiled the boys on his many visits, and he always had a “look” in his eye when he was getting ready to do it again. And he had that look this time.

“Boys!” he said, holding out both arms to catch the twins as they descended upon him. “And Delvin! And Marty! And Kevin!” he beamed, shaking each of his nephew’s chum’s hands in turn. “Great to see each of you! Just fine! Couldn’t be better!” he exclaimed in his odd little manner of speaking. Before any of the lads could speak, he held up his hand and silenced them. “Let me get to the point, lads. The point is what I need to make! Can’t stay but a moment, I have a train to catch, but I wouldn’t miss this for the world! No sir! Not for a world of sweet tea would I let this moment go by!” and he stamped his foot 3 times and took out his pocket watch, glanced at it, and clicked it shut.
“Now young men, I just came from the house and your mother informed me of your latest endeavor with your musical group and the dances you intend on putting up for the enjoyment of the other young people of this fair community.” The boys were virtually worn out from trying to follow his brisk manner of speech, but Uncle Hobart didn’t seem to notice.
“Now! As a businessman myself, man and boy, 45 years and still going, I know a thing or two about such undertakings. Not that I have ever been in a band myself, never could play a saxophone to save my life, but it seems to me that it should not be much different than any other endeavor of like nature.” and he took out a large kerchief and mopped his brow.
“Now, let me get to the point. I’m proud of you boys. Proud as I can be. I’ve said that since the day my nephews were born and knowing you other lads as well I can say the same for you. I’ve never heard nor seen anything from any of you to give me a moment’s pause and I cannot say that concerning all young gentlemen I’ve had the opportunity to make acquaintance of.” And he took his hat off his head, examined the band all around, and put it back on.
“Now! As I was saying before I was interrupted” and none of the boys could recall having interrupted Uncle Hobart, “As I was saying, I want to give you all the support I can muster!” and he looked around the barn at the work the boys had been doing. “What you are doing here is a fine thing and there is no telling where it might lead. And as I’ve always said, if you can’t do something at least halfway right, it seems as if you wouldn’t be doing it full justice!” which statement cause Johnny to start slightly.
“Now! Let me get to the point. I know the equipment by which you practice your trade one does not come by cheaply. And like anything, you will only be as good as the quality of your tools. Am I not right, lad?” and he jabbed the tip of his walking stick rather abruptly into Marty’s abdomen. “Of course I’m right!” Uncle Hobart said, taking off one shoe and examining the sole before returning it to his foot.
“Now! Here is the deal. I want to be a kind of silent partner in your band, if you will. Because I can’t sing a note!” and he doubled over with tears of laughter puddling up in his eyes, and slapped Delvin on the back so hard the boy all but lost his breath.
“Pardon the joke, boys, pardon the joke.” Uncle Hobart chuckled, wiping each eye with his fingertip. “But I reckon you will find this no joke!” and at that, Uncle Hobart reached into his suit pocket and pulled out a long folio. He opened it up and produced a sizeable number of crisp bills. As each boy looked on in disbelief, Uncle Hobart counted out many hundreds of dollars which he then held out to Johnny.
“Lads! This is my contribution to your band! Now, now. It is not charity. I know you all too well for that! As I said, I will be a silent partner. I can help you get started and if you need more, just come see me. All I ask is, if you hit the big time, remember your ol’ Uncle Hobart!” and he stood back, grinning ear to ear.

“Why, why…” gasped Jerry, staring at the pile of bills in his brother’s hand. “Oh my!” Johnny exclaimed weakly, his hand sagging under the weight of the bills. Marty and Delvin were openly and without shame crying and Kevin had passed out where he stood.

“Boys! Use it where it will do the most good, and it is good luck I wish you!” and Uncle Hobart pulled out his watch again and glanced at the time. “I wish I could stay and spend more time with you lads, but I really must be going. I have just enough time to say good bye to my sister. So! That’s it then!” and he offered his hand all around, save to Kevin, who was still out cold on the floor, and with a tip of his hat, he was gone as quickly as he had come.

“Did that really just happen, or am I dreaming?” said Johnny, still staring at the money his Uncle had given him. “It happened all right” said Jerry beginning to come out of his stupor. “It happened!” Marty blew his nose hard and Delvin walked a short distance away from his chums and then abruptly turned back. Kevin began muttering something about having purple shoe soles, and pushed himself up onto one elbow.

“Guys”, said Johnny looking solemn. “We have been handed a very big break. We have been getting by on equipment that gets the job done, but equipment we all know has severe limitations.” and he glanced down again at the money his uncle had so generously given them. “We are now in a position to take our band to the next level.” and for the first time a smile crossed his face.

Each of the boys by now was beginning to absorb the fact that the twin’s uncle had put them within reach of equipment they had heretofore only dreamed of.
“If I might put forth an idea”, said Marty. “Even though our PA is used, it really is a good one. Should we use this money for amps, keyboards, and guitars” and he cast a sidelong glance at Delvin, “and for drums”, and Delvin let out the breath he had been holding, “and then see how much we have left for other items we might need?”
Johnny glanced around the group and saw the look of approval upon the face of each of his friends. “I think that settles it, then!” Johnny said with a wide grin upon his face.
“Next stop” – and he paused for dramatic effect – “The Friendly Musician!”

Ricman
12-04-2008, 05:43 PM
Chapter two will be coming just as soon as it is finished!

Trout
12-04-2008, 05:47 PM
Can you post an audio version on YouTube?:phones

hogy
12-04-2008, 06:44 PM
Cliff Notes, please.

Ricman
12-05-2008, 06:40 PM
Chapter two is on it's way whether any one reads this fine piece of literature or not!

Dr. Tweedbucket
12-05-2008, 07:39 PM
Cool stuff man, you are a talented guy :BEER

Will there be any eventual guitar smashings? :confused:

halcyon85
12-05-2008, 08:41 PM
This is brilliant!!!

“For after all,” he would say, “this nation’s social milieu was built upon the barn dance as a way to bring neighbors and community together.”

Aunt Millicent was the twin’s father’s peppery, spinster sister, who had made her home with them ever since her husband had passed when the lobster boat he captained had been attacked by an entire school of great white sharks and one rogue dolphin.


:rotflmao

Really, great stuff. You've created a definite environment and tone, no pun intended. You have talent! :AOK

Ricman
12-08-2008, 05:51 PM
Cool stuff man, you are a talented guy :BEER

Will there be any eventual guitar smashings? :confused:

teh guitar smashing will be one to end all smashings, I promise you. Chapter two is almost done.
Thanks for the kind words everyone!

Dr. Tweedbucket
12-08-2008, 09:00 PM
teh guitar smashing will be one to end all smashings, I promise you. Chapter two is almost done.
Thanks for the kind words everyone!
Hee hee heeeee !!! :D




:knitting

Greggy
12-08-2008, 09:07 PM
teh guitar smashing will be one to end all smashings, I promise you. Chapter two is almost done.
Thanks for the kind words everyone!

Does your story adopt a sudden homoerotic twist in Chapter 2? I kinda get the impression it is going there, not that there is anything wrong with that. :eek:

Ricman
12-08-2008, 09:49 PM
Does your story adopt a sudden homoerotic twist in Chapter 2? I kinda get the impression it is going there, not that there is anything wrong with that. :eek:

No!!! If you've ever spent time with the Hardy Boys, Tom Swift, the Rover Boys, etc. you would see the obvious spoof here. The idea hit me of having an utterly naive rock and roll band get swept into the big time. Their mannerisms are purposely a blend of 1920's and 30's cliches, mixed a little with 1950's era Hardy Boys mentality, and then superimposed over a modern environment they live in. But nothing like you've hinted at. Only clean fun here!

Rik
12-08-2008, 10:11 PM
Does your story adopt a sudden homoerotic twist in Chapter 2? I kinda get the impression it is going there, not that there is anything wrong with that. :eek:

I am betting the drummer gets hooked on coke :drink :worried :knitting

Greggy
12-08-2008, 10:12 PM
No!!! If you've ever spent time with the Hardy Boys, Tom Swift, the Rover Boys, etc. you would see the obvious spoof here. The idea hit me of having an utterly naive rock and roll band get swept into the big time. Their mannerisms are purposely a blend of 1920's and 30's cliches, mixed a little with 1950's era Hardy Boys mentality, and then superimposed over a modern environment they live in. But nothing like you've hinted at. Only clean fun here!

Well, with talk of Delvin's cousin's snake, I just thought... Carry on, then!

Ricman
12-09-2008, 08:55 PM
Chapter two is posted!

rattles
12-31-2008, 08:51 PM
Bump # 4!

GuitarsFromMars
12-31-2008, 09:21 PM
bump#5