Critique a track for me?

[jehza8]

So I bought Ableton Live recently, probably a few too many plugins for my own good, and a midi controller.

This first song is half novelty, half an attempt to learn my way around the software and midi programming.

I'd be grateful if any generous listeners would check it out, give me some feedback on composition and mix. I'm new to the genre and this level of composition. So, if you have the time, "Brian de Catalogne":

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page...?bandID=757815

Cheers.