String Skipping pt.2

[nikbia]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=affeEt5UMFE
0.41

e|-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------|
a|-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------|
d|-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------|
g|-----------11-9-8-9-11------------------12-11-9-11-12--------------------11-9-8-9-11----------|
b|-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------|
e|-12-11-9----------------9-11-12-11-9---------------------9-11-12-11-9-----------------9-11-12|

What do you thinks and how it is played?
For me is very important your feedback
Thanks.

[SoCalGuy]

Sounds pretty badass to me. Full, melodic. Fun to listen to. And, I'm not big fan of high gain.

jb

[jcj]

Honest feedback?

You lost me as soon as you started playing quickly...not because I don't like speed (I do), but because it sounded like an excercise....almost like you thouhght "this is cool...where can I fit it in?" ...just didn't feel right for the piece...just IMO....

Liked the stuff in the beginning, though!

[Zingeroo]

I agree, the early melodic stuff was cool... And I love chops stuff... But it seemed kind of contrived. Maybe if you would have played the string skipping part only once...
Hey but on the plus side, I wish I could do that!