A Love Song I wrote -> Comments Please?

[sdlogan9]

Check out the song Titled --> " Same "

Very Basic recording, Just want info on the tune, advice good/bad comments. Maybe even some options for a bridge??

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_songInfo.cfm?bandID=703774&songID=6157324

Peace
Shane

 

[Dickie Fredericks]

Bad link...