First Clip ever posted

[ChazMania]

So I dunno what the hell I'm doing....but I want to learn how to record ideas. Here is my first time ever posting a clip. Its from my phone and I don't make all the changes as I hear in my head, so with that said.....go easy on me but I'd like some feedback.
thanks-

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WY1HnmZEbm0&context=C38aa6efADOEgsToPDskIdMIzCeGxfbsZh2nBjYiJL

 

[rockstah]

sounds good man. good sense of the music.
Mark