I've made an instrumental ballad. Care to listen?

[Hallvard]

Hi, just read about this forum from another forum, and it looks like a good community.

I'm Hallvard, 19 years old. I'm from Norway, but are currently studying in England.

Here is the track:

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=114434

Just click hifi or lofi play, you don't have to be a member to listen to the song.

I've used a Godin Solidac guitar for the lead, mixed humbucker and piezo signal. I've used a fender strat and vox wah for the rythm part.

Any comments, concerning songwriting, playing and mixing are warmly welcome.

Yours sincerely,
Hallvard

 

[MusicGearGuys]

Nice smooth jazz.
I liked the arrangement and your playing.
The tone was just ok of the Godin, but it sounds like that was all recording. It was buzzy IMHO.
I hope to hear more from you.
Hey, most importantly, did your girlfriend like it?

Gregory

 

[Hallvard]

I don't know yet, she is in Thailand. But I hope so

Thanks for your comments!

 

[Normster]

Good to see you made your way here. I've already listened and commented elsewhere, but just had to say again...I love this song.

Anyone have "professional" advice on the mix?