Need some help here

[majordelt]

OK, First let me say this is not my best work. It is however, a fair example of what I am currently thinking in this genre.. I want to improve... To accurately give you guys the real me, I got my sound and played one pass. here it is, the good the bad , and the ugly.. none the less, me.
I want your suggestions and criticisms..there are so many kick ass players on here I know I can get the help I need.. Let it fly, you wont offend me.
Thanks,
Ronnie
http://soundcloud.com/majordelt/steely-dan-pactice-mix